You've laid the foundation for another great story. Established new and intriguing characters, set the scene, and created some conflict and tension. I can't wait to read more. Thank you G.K.
Just started reading this, and I'm looking forward to finishing it with my morning coffee. But before I forget, and since I don't have a paper manuscript draft to mark up, I'd better say now: I believe the first word should be "It" and not "I."
You've laid the foundation for another great story. Established new and intriguing characters, set the scene, and created some conflict and tension. I can't wait to read more. Thank you G.K.
Just started reading this, and I'm looking forward to finishing it with my morning coffee. But before I forget, and since I don't have a paper manuscript draft to mark up, I'd better say now: I believe the first word should be "It" and not "I."
Raoul Renaud